One of Kansas City's premier parks is Jacob Loose Memorial Park just south of the famous Kansas City Country Club Plaza. In this poem, it becomes a setting for an exploration of destructive passion and love late at night in the dead of winter. There are great loves that are not good loves or smart loves. Sometimes they turn deadly. Sometimes--if we're very lucky--we barely escape such loves with our skins intact, though hearts may be broken.
APACHE
DANCE IN LOOSE PARK
The man and
woman in the frozen park
at midnight
are crazy. See
them
dance—come together,
her eyes
spitting, his aware of his sin.
Watch her
rigid stance
melt and
his slouch turn fierce.
With
choreographed impulse, her hand extends
to touch
his cheek. He jerks away
in pain or
something rougher.
Her
shoulders sag, then square
themselves
and shrug. She pivots,
ready to
leave. Now he reaches out,
spins her
around, draws her
close. She
struggles
against his
arms and chest, hands fluttering, while
he drags
her off the spotlit sidewalk.
Watch her
glance at the dark bushes, then
at the
strange hate
in his
face. See how grim
her own
grows, how
she tosses
her head toward the night,
as if to
say, “Go ahead.
Get it over
with. Rape me, kill me,
end it
somehow. You can’t want that
any more
than I do.”
Now his
face softens.
Once more
she tries to touch.
He sways
away from her outstretched fingertips.
They’re
crazy. Listen
to her
laugh, twisting loose
and
whirling away from her opponent
in the
dance or war
they’ve
staged here
where all
breath is visible
under the
streetlamps. How fast
she runs to
her car and leaves.
How
unprepared for this step he is.
He can’t
reach out
to stop her
until her car is rolling
down the
drive. In the rearview mirror,
she will
see his hand lift,
his mouth
open, his face twist,
and she
will notice
what a
stranger he is, older
and fatter
and sadder
than she
realized.
She will
stop for coffee and doughnuts
and warmth,
sit coughing and shivering
alone and
hate every man
who eyes
her. He will clutch his chest
alone under
the streetlamp,
bowing to
the audience of tree and frost,
then
stumble, suddenly blind,
to his car
and drink
himself to
bed, only to dream
of shrubs
hiding blood and bruised flesh
on the
frozen ground, of how
a man can
come so close to killing
what he
loves.
Published in Heart’s Migration
(Tia Chucha Press, 2009)
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After cancer and heart disease 'unintentional injury' is a leading cause of death in women in my community. This made me wonder if wild dancing was a catalyst for some of those injuries. You know I love your poems Linda.
ReplyDeleteYeah, Kim. Never want to go there again myself. Too intense and dangerous.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the kind words.
"her eyes spitting" and "she will notice
ReplyDeletewhat a stranger he is, older
and fatter and sadder
than she realized." This told the story of many lovers. Love this poem.
Thanks, Mona. I'm glad you liked it.
ReplyDeleteI am stunned, I am in awe, in frozen space surrounded by thee Pictures swirling in my imagination produced by these few printed words torn from a woman's breast and splashed upon my very being. I am in total surrender to your word painting, causing me to take my breath in short gasps. Wondrous art............ your facebook friend, Lloyd
ReplyDeleteLloyd, I'm glad you liked the poem. Thanks for your kind words, my friend.
ReplyDeleteLinda. Whew. This is the most amazing poem I have ever read. A thriller... wow. I want to say something brilliant about it, but my mind i still whirling inside of it.
ReplyDeleteDear Reine! I'm glad you liked it. xoxoxo
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